tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6277113273694364333.post1017345706437799024..comments2023-08-13T04:36:41.000-07:00Comments on Author Nichole Severn: I Need Your HelpNataschahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15971236835645904189noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6277113273694364333.post-86115171727123911512011-05-08T08:28:48.431-07:002011-05-08T08:28:48.431-07:00No, I don't think he/she would make the story ...No, I don't think he/she would make the story stronger. Maybe I should create the character (I haven't yet), but not have his POV.Nataschahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15971236835645904189noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6277113273694364333.post-57886303994357648962011-05-05T09:53:28.474-07:002011-05-05T09:53:28.474-07:00How important is the FBI (in terms of what they...How important is the FBI (in terms of what they're thinking/strategizing) to the story? Do you need their perspective or to explain why they do things to make the story stronger? If not, don't add an FBI agent's POV. Just have them as the other menace beside the bad guy.Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.com