June 5, 2011

Excerpt from New WIP

I managed to take a few minutes from school to write the very first page of my new WIP. No, Sara, this isn't the one you're thinking about. Tell me what you think of this hook! Leave a comment on what you think of this excerpt and stop by on Tuesday and Thursday this week to hear from my special guests!

            A quick glance toward her partner told Avery Dawson that he was very close to blowing their cover.
Anxiety had managed to work its way into her throat. Their lives depended on him delivering a perfect performance and, from the way Liam’s hands shook over the keyboard, she imagined she’d be leaving the bank in a body bag by noon. Only one element of this operation varied from the dozens of others: this was personal.


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